Dear Sir or Madam
In the most simple terms, one cannot keep something for which she has not paid. Having said that, if your daughter was given the loan in the first place, and the check was issued, I'm not sure why the loan was "canceled" merely because the check did not cash. It should be treated as a lost instrument for which you can get a new check (for which fees may be charged).
It sounds however like your daughter cannot now afford the car. If that is the case, then she should contact the seller and discuss returning it to them. Since it was their failure to properly process the documents, I would negotiate giving back the car without having to pay anything for depreciation or use. But for the car dealer's negligence, there would have been loan in place.
Sincerely,
Michael J. Katz
303-790-4103
Attorney at Law
Answered on Dec 02nd, 2011 at 12:56 PM